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Dialogus Aeturnum by `j4m3sb0nd:iconj4m3sb0nd:





Who forms structures amidst the unknowable
Wherein the eternal dialogues lay?
Fanciful constructions of the essence
Existing in philosophical garbs
Dressed in purple, but tattered and torn
Bereft of their own value

Dialogus Aeturnum
Creating infinites through the subsets of infinite
Thus The descriptors of eternity, the finite ad infinitum
And the narrowing perception of that which transcends
The [in]finitude of attributes
An amorphous coalescence of forms

Nay,

The conscious realisation of forms
An inseparable totality; an amorphous coalescence
Yet perceived
By the narrowed filtration of perceptions
To the angularities that govern
[in]sensibility
©2009 `j4m3sb0nd
:iconj4m3sb0nd:

Author's Comments

This is a poem I had written a fair while ago (around August last year), but hadn't uploaded. I've now considered sharing it however, having not posted anything in a while, and hopefully this manages to inspire someone or otherwise hold interest, as I've tried to evoke a certain depth of meaning via the coalescence of wording.

Thanks for any feedback in advance.

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:iconsashona:
Nice job with the poem, dude :) An the picture is great as always :)

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Those who fall often stand down...I'm not one of them
:icondahnza:
They go great together, and poem thoroughly draws a question, then an answer, although the top stanza's last 4 lines don't really fit it =)

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~Everything so pure has slowly faded to a lesser shade of gray...~
:iconsilva-zodiac:
Very interesting. Commenting on the philosophies and science of eternity is no easy task, but you conveyed the fundamental inability of humanity to understand the All very well. You also used the squared brackets in a pretty original way here, allowing for a double meaning.

I really have to disagree with Dahnza because I can see that you were commenting on the colour purple, which dominates the picture. Purple is also considered, symbolically and esoterically, a very important colour in philosophy and art. And the last part, a comment on the aesthetic value of beauty, is fitting in a response to visual art. So I believe those four lines in the first stanza do line up with the picture.

Great piece. It's going in my favourites.
:iconetheryn:
hard words put togheter into non-sence sentences? i find no point in this poem more than the difficult words make it look 'cool'

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.. and vile was the price for which they did sell their souls.
:iconj4m3sb0nd:
No.

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The future belies your preconceptions...
:iconj4m3sb0nd:
Thank you for sharing your thoughts on the piece, I'm quite glad you appreciated it. You grasped some key aspects of it quite well indeed.

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The future belies your preconceptions...
:iconj4m3sb0nd:
Thank you. The top stanza is very much like a key for the meaning of the rest, though.

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The future belies your preconceptions...
:iconsoloact-the-bard:
:clap: B-)

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"Scoffers of the Bible's Prophesies tend to readily embrace other false belief systems, ie: rapture, Nostradamus, evolution, & the History Channel's opinions." "It's very dangerous to call one's self a Christian, and call God's Word a conspiracy theory."

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